8
Apr
Light!
Dark?
Yet both at once…
Strange.
Perhaps I dream?
Or are they yet me.
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The Four Part Land
Fury rolled forth from the armies, great waves of hate and anger. In the sky overhead fire clashed with air, and battle was joined, as the forces of Hymerodraeth Heula and Niam Liad collided.
~Legends of Bedwar Barthu Dirio
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Michael tate on 04.08.2011
Interesting. It was the “flashiest” fiction i read today, but it worked and that’d what counts.
Adamjkeeper on 04.08.2011
deeply enigmatic. the first two lines made me chuckle and then it got pretty intense.
Adam B on 04.08.2011
Very clever, sir and well played.
Adam B @revhappiness
Lara Dunning on 04.12.2011
Short, but says so much. Like the questioning nature of this and the yin and yang concept.
The Four Part Land on 04.14.2011
@Michael 30 seconds of inspiration one day. Normally I’d call this a “poem”, but I don’t really know where it fits.
@AdamJ I don’t really know the meaning behind it, but I can guess. I have a habit of looking on the dark side. Suits me better as an author, for whatever reason.
@AdamB Thanks, really did enjoy writing this one.
@Lara Wasn’t really thinking of Yin and Yang when I wrote this, didn’t actually have anything in mind, as is often the case with my flash. I write what comes to mind, and then poke the finished story to see if there’s something there.